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Cold as ice
Pure as snow
Let fall your tears of sorrow
Close your eyes
And worry not
I'll see you again tomorrow

Forget your fear
Forget your pain
Our spirits have not died
From now on and
Forever more
I'll keep you by my side

You were a soldier
You were a guard
You were my weapon of war
I'm full of regret
Because now I know
Your worth was so much more

You took the fall
You sacrificed
You gave your life for me
But then I saw
Life's not worth living
If you're not here with me

I see your face
So pale in death
Yet radiant with grace
I take your hand
I close my eyes
We'll go to the same place

We're cold as ice
We're pure as snow
And none will ever know
Our souls will be
Forever bound
By the silent falling snow
©2008-2009 ~Rhisis
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Author's Comments

Ah, an old poem from an old account of mine. *sigh* So many old arts on that account, heh...

I wrote this during my senior year of high school. It was my first submission to the school arts magazine, which featured *duh* art and literature submitted by students. I remember giving another poem to my teacher (he was in charge of said magazine) and then giving him this one stating, "I'm not submitting this, I just want your opinion on it."

He goes, "...Why are you not submitting this?"

I ended up letting him put it in. He could only put in one of my poems, and he chose this one because he adored it (and looking back, my first poem sucked. Notice I didn't salvage that one? Ha!).

As I mentioned on my old description, this one was sort of Zabuza and Haku inspired. They're still two of my favorite characters in the series, and I believe that, out of all of the characters, they shared one of the most meaningful relationships.

I think that's one of the reasons why I liked the relationship between Orochimaru and Kabuto. In some ways, it is similar, so it gave me something to go to after losing what I originally liked.

Anyway, enough blabbering about Naruto. It's a poem. Read, sip some tea, and enjoy.

For those interested in linkage to stuff that is mostly crap piled upon crap...

Old Account: [link]
Link to the Poem: [link]

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Ooh thats beautiful!! :) Great poetry!

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When Jesus died on the cross, he was thinking of you.

Awesome icon by ~Shadowkitten20!!
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Thank you ^^

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